Topic: Many people believe that an effective public transport system is a key component of modern city. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of public transport.
It is obviously witnessed that public transportation has played a vital role in developed society recently. Besides several benefits, it brings numerous unexpected drawbacks that users might face. This essay will give a detailed analysis of two opposite aspects.
On the one hand, public transports are considered cheap and comfortable. Firstly, the cost of each move is reasonable for everybody either high class or low class. Not only can they save fuels due to containing a vast number of people, but also they are subsidized by the government. As the result, passengers might spend little money on displacing by this way. Secondly, people can do anything while moving without driving concentration. Each public means has its own driver, travelers could read books, listening to music or relax after the stressful day. In addition, they also utilize it when they drink too much alcohol to avoid accidents.
On the other hand, there are some downsides of this transportation. To begin with, it may be unsafe if humans take seats on public means. The reason is that thieves could hide in the crowd then steal valuable assets namely laptops, smartphones and purchases. Moreover, it might take a lot of time to wait and transfer because of scheduled and controlled routes. Instead of going directly to wanted places, individuals could have to stop at stations and move around before finished points. For example, students usually wait 20 minutes for a bus then it picks up other passengers at bus stops and finally moves to their school.
In conclusion, public transportation is paramount importance in our life nowadays for their low costs and convenient services. Whereas, danger and time-wasting are disadvantages which should be improved to make this system better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21678321678 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.811849764 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.7569010019 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.8888888889 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0555555556 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132360162007 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397363444519 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605664276709 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860553793531 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438900084833 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.