The occasion when you experienced a rejection
The occasion I am rejected which is so unforgettable, that first declared one's love at the coffee shop class when I was in 12th grade. I attracted by a girl who is the classmate. I thought that she also liked me, so I planned to confess my love to her. That day, I came the coffee shop very early and prepared heart candles, balloons, rose bundle and a gift.I rented a room of there and decorated that room with balloons, roses, heart candles;furthermore, I play some love songs. After that, I called her and said: " Would you like to grab the coffee?" she agreed, I was so happy and extremely excited. Then about 30 minutes she came; I thought with my love and the romantic atmosphere she would immediately accept my confession. However, everything was not as I thought, she started scolding and swearing at me. She shed my gift on the floor and gone away. She shed my gift on the floor and gone away. I was disappointed and ashamed with people in the coffee shop. That was rejection I can't forget in my life
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 359, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ndles, balloons, rose bundle and a gift.I rented a room of there and decorated th...
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Line 1, column 998, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...n the coffee shop. That was rejection I cant forget in my life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 5.60731707317 678% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45454545455 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76374894226 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 1.53170731707 1045% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.9761781619 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7272727273 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.082853443407 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321362619188 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613667300339 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082853443407 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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