Some people believe that there should be freedom in expression of artist other people believe that same is not an appropriate right. Express your opinion by stating with relevant example.
A bunch of people believed that liberty should be given to artists while many others disagree with the idea. My opinion regarding this statement is in upcoming paragraphs.
Firstly, creative artists express feelings through their work. Creations could be an art, film, music, religious and social aspect depicted in a painting. Admittedly, artists have been creating innovative masterpieces in favour of current issues but sometime it result in negative influence to the society. For instance an artist has painted naked goddess which hurted sentiments of hindu society.
Furthermore, filmmakers are adding extra content in biographic movies which was actually not happened and create opposite impact on audience. Though music is considered as stress relieving therapy but in present time it is also getting worst due to its shameful lyrics.
However artists need freedom to create innovative things but it should be given only to an extent that no one can get hurted from their creations. Government should have to set rules and regulation to get hold on such non acceptable stuff. Meanwhile audience would need to appreciate the work of artists in positive manner.
Moreover media has also great impact on political powers. For instance, whenever an issue gets in headlines by media related to social values and political issues then people get much aware from it but sometime media peep into the personal life of political leaders and create problems to them.
In the end to my point of view the freedom to express the artistic thoughts should be given within the limits of rules and regulations set by the government.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23282442748 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60304504039 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637404580153 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.255763065 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227361256463 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704248528781 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792519613874 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115379616298 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856878437715 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.