You are about to go on vacation for one month. A friend from another town will come and stay in your apartment. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
Explain where your friend can get the keys to the apartment
Give your friends some instructions about using your apartment
Recommend some places to go.
Dear Byran,
Hello! and how are you doing?.I hope this letter meets you well. I'm writing to inform that I'll be heading to Jeddah tomorrow for a one month vacation to get some rest. Well, since you're keen on staying in my apartment, I'd like to inform you that I left the keys with John, my next door neighbour. I'm sure you have his number as he will be expecting your call.
Please,there are some few important things I'd love you to take care of while you're still there. First, the windows should be properly closed as the sand storm can make a big mess of the apartment. It will also prevent you from regular cleaning.Besides, you can make use of the air conditioner. Also , I'll appreciate it if you'd always switch off all electrical appliances apart from the fridge while leaving the apartment. It will help reduce the electricity bill
As for places to visit, there is a sports club just few blocks down the street. You can visit there at your leisure time. Do you remember The Chef restaurant?, I'm sure you do. It is just opposite my apartment. You can stroll in there anytime and have your favourite dish ,rice and chicken. I'll be back in a month's time and I hope to see you because we have a lot of catching up to do.
I can't wait to see you soon!
Best wishes,
IKENNA.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Byran, Hello! and how are ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
... Hello! and how are you doing?.I hope this letter m...
^^^
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... Hello! and how are you doing?.I hope this letter meets you well. Im wri...
^
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ing?.I hope this letter meets you well. Im writing to inform that Ill be heading t...
^^
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
... vacation to get some rest. Well, since youre keen on staying in my apartment, Id lik...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
... youre keen on staying in my apartment, Id like to inform you that I left the keys...
^^
Line 3, column 319, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...keys with John, my next door neighbour. Im sure you have his number as he will be ...
^^
Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... neighbour. Im sure you have his number as he will be expecting your call. ...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r as he will be expecting your call. Please,there are some few important thin...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...your call. Please,there are some few important things Id love y...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...ase,there are some few important things Id love you to take care of while youre st...
^^
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...hings Id love you to take care of while youre still there. First, the windows should ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Besides
... also prevent you from regular cleaning.Besides, you can make use of the air conditione...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...an make use of the air conditioner. Also , Ill appreciate it if youd always switch...
^^
Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...make use of the air conditioner. Also , Ill appreciate it if youd always switch off...
^^^
Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'd
...onditioner. Also , Ill appreciate it if youd always switch off all electrical applia...
^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill help reduce the electricity bill As for places to visit, there is a sport...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are a sports'?
Suggestion: there are a sports
... As for places to visit, there is a sports club just few blocks down the street. Y...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
.... Do you remember The Chef restaurant?, Im sure you do. It is just opposite my apa...
^^
Line 7, column 290, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ere anytime and have your favourite dish ,rice and chicken. Ill be back in a month...
^^
Line 7, column 310, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... your favourite dish ,rice and chicken. Ill be back in a months time and I hope to ...
^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se we have a lot of catching up to do. I cant wait to see y...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 23, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...o. I cant wait to see you soon! Best wi...
^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I cant wait to see you soon! Best wishes, IKENNA.
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...see you soon! Best wishes, IKENNA.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, so, still, well, while, apart from, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 238.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44117647059 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43360747355 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634453781513 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7058704694 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4666666667 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8666666667 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 2.54639175258 982% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252236335869 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084394419248 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488969882627 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140015373848 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742033215935 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.