Stress
As we all know that, more and more people are facing lots of stressful things in daily life; throughout the world, this has become a concern of any kind of people. But this has still happened day by day without non-stop signal, so why this reality gets more popular despite of its consequences.
The most obvious reason is caused by the innovative society. Since the highly developing of the world has somehow negatively influenced on human beings. Therefor, people easily get stucked or stressed while keeping pace up with the busy life; most of them who have to deal with tons of work find it difficult to live their dream life. Stress has been an obsession to workaholic, even worst, they feel depressed and miserable more frequently, but the amount of things to finish doesn't allow them to breath. And the other factor worth mentioning is that people usually have their brains worked under so much pressure, and this not only does harm to their health but also seriously affects to their temper. Many surveys have shown that the more stressful people feel, the more indifferent they are. But nowadays, people need to be hard-working in work office as well as in real life to support their living. Stress is gradually part of our current life, so we have to endure it to get used to the fast living pace and make ends our meets. However, to some group of people, who live for materialism, nothing can satisfy them but money and sense of accomplishment, these kind of people always want to achieve big dreams and stress can't distract them at all; thus, in a different aspect, I think stress is a token of a brighter future coming.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...on is caused by the innovative society. Since the highly developing of the world has ...
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Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...tly, but the amount of things to finish doesnt allow them to breath. And the other fa...
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Line 3, column 1162, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... but money and sense of accomplishment, these kind of people always want to achieve big dr...
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Line 3, column 1228, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s want to achieve big dreams and stress cant distract them at all; thus, in a differ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, thus, well, while, i think, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6875 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41379139299 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635416666667 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0933979074 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.727272727 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241932628845 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923228833534 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874096127897 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171417272495 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741475450555 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.