TPO 17: Do you Agree/Disagree.
Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With recent advances in technology, especially the introduction of social media, the importance of advertisement has reached a high degree. In this regard, some people believe that most ads present wrong facts about products, while others rely on advertisements a lot. As long as I know, the use of exaggeration in advertisements is a true story; and I will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, advertisements are made to affect people and encourage them to buy a product. Making exaggerations in advertisements will have an undeniable impact on individuals. The reason for this influence is that people usually don't really care about the accuracy of the facts. Instead, they are attracted to diverse filming techniques which make an ad beautiful and enjoyable to watch. For example, a dairy company once produced an advertisement about a specific kind of milk. It stated that this milk was better than other milk products in terms of protein and calcium. The result was that people bought a lot of that product and believed the product's superior quality. However, after some weeks, a sample of that milk was tested; and the result showed no difference between that particular milk and others.
Second, companies today have to use such a strategy in order to compete with others. Unfortunately, the use of exaggeration is a widespread technique. Advertisements will lose their effect and are incapable of competing with other brands unless they implement some sort of overstating about their products. Food supplement ads are a good example of this. Nowadays there are hundreds of brands making supplements for athletes as well as ordinary people. The main feature of all of these companies is that they mention highly positive points about their products, which are nothing but lies. However, by avoiding these wrong statements, they will lose a great number of their customers.
Admittedly, some advertisements can be found which try to provide the most accurate information about products. The attitude behind these ads is that people will eventually find the truth about a product; and if the quality is not satisfying, they will stop consuming that product. However, in my opinion, these kinds of advertisements are in minority and are not able to survive.
To sum up, I am convinced that ads are not a reliable source of information about products. They exaggerate about a product in order to encourage the consumers to buy it and to stay in the market and be able to compete. In my perspective, accepting the existence of some frank advertisements does not change the actual trend in advertising a product.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...uth about a product; and if the quality is not satisfying, they will stop consuming that product....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, second, so, well, while, for example, kind of, sort of, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2222.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13163972286 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00864316818 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517321016166 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 702.9 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.01682902 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.5833333333 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0416666667 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54166666667 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176459437857 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519362501475 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247039994438 0.0737576698707 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101511936987 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218565602687 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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