in many countries school age children are spending theirfree time in doing homework.is it a good or bad thing?what is your own opinion?give examples to support your view.
no one can deny that school age children spending their free time in doing homework.it should be important for children .some parents little bit agree with this . i think it is vital if their children are doing homework.student are doing extra knowledge.
if they children doing homework at home then they have improve knowledge and skills . for example : students have home related to science . they do this type of subject with team or group.same thing at home parents should help their children about work.mostly students have a lot of homework.they doing help with parents.
on the other side when students have a home work. then they have a lot of stress when they came back to home.they have no extra time for extra activity for sports or hagging up with their parents. they have only work.i remember it, when i was child,i have a lot of home work.i never attend any parties when i was child.
Sentence: if they children doing homework at home then they have improve knowledge and skills . for example : students have home related to science . they do this type of subject with team or group.same thing at home parents should help their children about work.mostly students have a lot of homework.they doing help with parents.
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Suggestion: Refer to they and children
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Suggestion: Refer to have and improve
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