Shopping is your hobby

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 27, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Now
Dear, Thank you for your letter.Now i would like to tell you about my hobby...
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Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
Dear, Thank you for your letter.Now i would like to tell you about my hobby w...
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Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Our
...spend my weekend wandering at the malls.Our favorite malls are, The Aeon Long Bien...
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Line 2, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at the malls.Our favorite malls are, The Aeon Long Bien, Vincom center .I like lo...
^^
Line 2, column 276, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... are, The Aeon Long Bien, Vincom center .I like looking around the stores and the...
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Line 2, column 278, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...re, The Aeon Long Bien, Vincom center .I like looking around the stores and thei...
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Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Where
... love shopping, being a genuine shopper?Where do you shop? What to buy? Or do you hav...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... I look forward to hearing from you.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, then, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 5.60731707317 624% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34391534392 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26427828066 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68253968254 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.5887453494 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6363636364 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17196655315 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647857128433 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839035363166 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110208692618 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849670767376 0.0819641961636 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.