After working in your department for over 3 years, you feel the need to switch your department. Write a letter to your boss requesting a change in the department. In the letter mention:
Why do you want to switch department
Which department would you prefer
Why do you think you are a good fit in that department
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to appeal you to alter my current work division. Since I have been serving water resources section for 3 years now, I have gained tremendous experience related to water resources management and therefore would like to work in another sector.
My preference would be to contribute in flood forecasting center in fast-paced environment along with learning from senior engineers presently working in that division. Additionally, I am eager to gain peak flow forecasting skills to broaden my horizon.
I am quite confident that a combination of my educational an professional background will make me an ideal member of the flood forecasting team. Further, recently I have undergone an Internship at flood forecasting division of Manitoba Infrastructure that inculcated competent skills in me such as working in result-oriented environment and adhering to deadlines.
I would be really grateful if you consider my request of changing departments.
Your sincerely,
Nita Singh
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| 2019-01-20 | Nita Singh | 78 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to appeal you t...
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Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nt that a combination of my educational an professional background will make me an...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hanging departments. Your sincerely, Nita Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59615384615 4.54256449028 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31728756342 2.54303337028 130% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673076923077 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8973265013 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.125 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127871803046 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644999741083 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630484812223 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788672388496 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632478822614 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 8.37731958763 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 8.71597938144 174% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.