Some people think government should ban dangerous sports and some others think it is a freedom to choose the activities we want to. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
it goes without saying that people have found many ways to get the dose of adrenalin. One of them is dangerous activities. Though some human beings believe that those activities have to be prohibited. I am going to show two points of view of this.
I want to start by saying that there many unsafe things to do in sports. many people want to do them, because of excitement and adrenaline. For instance, some sports items such as motor race can be dangerous not only for drivers and also for viewers or workers, due to the fact that drivers can lose control over the wheel at any time. However, there are those who claim that the dangerous sport is challenging sport and it helps you to develop your flexibility and sustainability. But challenging sport should not always be hurting.
On the other hands, somebody thinks that people should be free to choose any hobby they want to do. Today information is open for access, so people can clearly estimate the consequences of hurting sport and know the price of probability to leave their footprints on the history of the sport. Moreover, the youth generation yearns for a try of extreme activities. so the positive view of it, that youth can experiment it in the safety circumstances.
In conclusion, today people are aware of the dangers and consequences of some activity. and can choose their preferences freely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n. One of them is dangerous activities. Though some human beings believe that those ac...
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...ere many unsafe things to do in sports. many people want to do them, because of exci...
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Suggestion: So
...yearns for a try of extreme activities. so the positive view of it, that
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...vities. so the positive view of it, that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67788461538 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59750232073 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620192307692 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.2663864059 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8461538462 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220833021663 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689472585897 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441446194219 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138568862214 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207580640255 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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