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The table compares consumer expenditure on three different categories in Ireland, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002.
Overall , all countries spent the most on food , drinks and tobacco , while expenditure on leisure and education was lowest . The expenditure of Turkey was higher than the other countries .
Turkey spent the most money on food / drinks / tobacco , at around 32% , while the figure for Ireland was slightly lower , at nearly 29% . Sweden spent the least money on three items , at only 15.8% of the total expenditure . The proportion of spending on leisure / education was highest in Turkey , at 4.35% , whereas the figure for Spain was lowest , at only 1.98%.
In terms of clothing and footwear , Italy spent more than the other countries , at about 9% , while the lowest proportion was seen in Spain , at 5.4% . the other countries spent on average around 6.5% each.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 725.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10563380282 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56181025888 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 106.607317073 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6732515781 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.625 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 1.69756097561 1296% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0242428254878 0.215688989381 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0152004143483 0.103423049105 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402165161907 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0304008286965 0.15604864568 19% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526557798946 0.0819641961636 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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