Some people feel that wrtain workers like nurse, doctor and teacher are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film stars and company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work they do?
It is really true fact that certain workers like nurse doctors, teachers and soldier are the important persons of our society and our life they play an improtant role in our life.and their contribution are remarkable celebrities and company bosses do not contribution and do not help in any thing. they are paid fair amount of money rather than certain workers .
Firstly, certain workers like nurse, doctors,soldier and teacher are not only workers they are second god of our life. they always work for our country without any expectation who always work for the development of our society and country.teacher who teaches our children and society and make them educated. and secure our country's futurer. doctor also known as god becse they save patients life and make society and country heathly and fit.they also provide their pravite time to hospital for patients.nurses take care of seek people and patients all time day and night. nurses help patients.soldiers protect our country and us from enemies. without the care of their life so they should be paid more for their remarkable work.
Secondly celebrities and company bosses are paid a lot of money compared to certain workers. they are associated with a different types of professions such as sports,film drams and national companies so they all are paid highly. they do nothing for society and country but they spoile younger time and money both. Nowadays people are mental for celebrities. mostly younger became totally blind for film stars. celebrities and companies CEO'S earn lot of money without any contribution to develop country. however they work hard for that. so some good steps should be taken to make solution of these kind of issues as quickly as possible.
In conclusion,I totally agree that certain workers should be paid more than film stars because they give significant contribution for country .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1339869281 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72492748576 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516339869281 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9062644771 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4117647059 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187010918505 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704192534144 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571137392486 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139107279411 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328008578976 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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