100 years ago people thought that the human race was steadily making progress in all areas of life. Nowadays there is less certainty that it is so. In what areas do you think the most important progress has been made so far? In what areas are more things needed to be done?
Give reasons for your answers & include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Decade’s ago it was been suggested that humans have started to explore every aspects of life in a regular basis but at present it is less certain. Over the years, people have made a tremendous amount of increase in the field of technology and medicine. There are fields which are required to focused on such as the anti-destruction of the natural calamities.
On the one hand, humans have discovered and invented many things, one most successful invention was computers. During the early days of invention, computers was in the size of a room. Later on with the advancement of technology computers were made so compact that fits in our hands and easily they can be transported to any geographical location in a back pack.
In the field of medicine, people have very little resources to explore with in the early ages and some individuals traveled across the world in the search of cure for the deceases like fever, dengue, malaria and much more. The travelers have found that Indians use some kind of powder to cure such decease, they were curious and wanted to know more about it and they started to explore with items and found many cures for many deceases. In todays world people have discovered many other decease and their antibiotics, they have advanced in many aspects.
On the other hand, the life style of the people have improved to the greater extend and the environment have been destroyed to a greater extend as the both are inversely proportional to each other. From the past few years, people have started to reduce their destruction and planted on anti-destruction of environment. The more they save the nature the less the problems they face.
To conclude, the humans have discovered and invented products in all the areas of life this has been increasing from the past decade. There are many fields in which people have achieved many advancement similarly there are other fields where improvement is required.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: WAS_BEEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'was' or 'has been'?
Suggestion: was; has been
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Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d they started to explore with items and found many cures for many deceases. In t...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advancement seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much advancement', 'a good deal of advancement'.
Suggestion: much advancement; a good deal of advancement
...ny fields in which people have achieved many advancement similarly there are other fields where ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91158536585 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6905224382 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496951219512 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7700700422 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.071428571 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118746297309 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462530136911 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041362856883 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076089773866 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304405626536 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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