success
The story of My Life
Everyone must want success, success is not only that we can get a lot of money, but also success is something that can make happiness, not only for ourselves but also for the people around us. As Bill Gates was asked "what does success mean?" and he answered by quoting his friend "Warren Buffett always said that the measure of his success is when the people near you feel happy and love you." In addition, all of us also have different goals and priorities, which mean that various activities and attitudes will make us feel good about ourselves. In getting that success, we must have basic, the basic is hard skills and soft skills. Hard skill is a technical ability that can be obtained by self-study or through education or training and soft skill is the ability to manage yourself and others. In addition, when we have the success we want, we will get the happiness we have been waiting for.
It’s like the experience when I was in the 6th grade in elementary school in Bogor, it’s like other children who were eyeing junior high school favorites, I also targeted one of the junior high school favorites in Bogor, namely SMP 3 Bogor. If someone wants to be accepted as a student at SMP 3 Bogor, it is not easy, it's because we had to get high scores and take some written tests. Before that, I always studied hard to get high scores, but I was hampered in one of the lessons, namely mathematics, especially on the material of Least common multiple and Greatest common divisor that used the "factor tree". Even though I attended the course in school, I always got low scores, sometimes I thought, I wanted to give up. However, when my friend invited me to join her sister's course, I accepted it. Every Thursday to Sunday, I joined the course, when I told her about my problem in learning the Least common multiple and Greatest common divisors, she gave me an easy way to do that, I called it a "Kotak sawah". When I applied that method, I often got a high score.
When the national examination arrived, I always studied hard to get a high score, so that I could be accepted at SMP 3 Bogor. I always asked about some materials which I didn't understand. When the national examination finished, not only do I feel happy but also my mother, she cried because she felt happy when she saw me get the third highest Pure Ebtanas Value (NEM). What makes me happiest when I knew my math score is 9.75, and I was the student who gets the highest math scores among my friend. When my mother and I went to our home and I told my father about my NEM, especially my mathematical value, my father was very happy and it made me very touched. My father also agreed if I registered at SMP 3 Bogor
When the day of registration until junior high school arrived, my father escorted me to several junior high schools and one of them was SMP 3 Bogor to register there. After a few days, I also took a written test at SMP 3 Bogor, and I met three of my friends there because the majority of my friends enrolled at SMP 20 Bogor. Then, when I saw the announcement about the students who were accepted, I was very afraid if my grades were insufficient because I knew there were many smart students taking the test, but it turned out that my guess was wrong and I was accepted in SMP 3, even though my score was almost insufficient. This has become the greatest success in my life that has ever happened in my educational process. From my experience, we can conclude that success is not only getting something big but also getting a small thing that can make people around us happy.
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