Nowadays government is spending a lot of money on wildlife instead of new projects for development. Discuss this issue it’s positive or negative impact on our society with your own experience

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Nowadays government is spending a lot of money on wildlife instead of new projects for development. Discuss this issue it’s positive or negative impact on our society with your own experience

Recently,government spending has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question that government allocating a lot of money on wildlife instead of new projects.Whereas it is a widely held view that _ is highly beneficial, I will discuss important aspects of that throughout this essay.

From the people’s standpoint, excessive use of bucks on wild life is bound up inextricably with other crucial projects on standstill, which indicates they might lead to both underdevelopment and negative impact on economy . For instance, a recent study demonstrates the relationship between forest beings and various development programs as well as an exponential increase in economic of the country.Consequently, my empirical evidence supports the likelihood of leaders of nation spending more amount on wilds is correlated positively with not only underdevelopment. But also declining of nations overall development.

Within the realm of world finances without the slightest doubt, government spending more on wild life counterparts attribute to steep decrease of ongoing projects to hault of in that it would come down to distrust from nations leaders.A salient example of such attribution is in France government has allocated a lot of wildlife which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take for granted. Besides, this criterion is an indispensable part of modern lifestyle. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of spending on new projects is necessary .

To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes “all’s well that ends well,” after analysing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that government should partially spend both on wildlife and new projects . However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, still, well, whereas, as for, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58273381295 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4875160892 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63309352518 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.654636532 49.4020404114 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.444444444 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8888888889 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8888888889 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318327275791 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105486584186 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621187635899 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173140154912 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258400626376 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.