you have recently ordered a book online, but the book was delayed and has not arrived yet. write a letter give the detail of your order . Explain why you need the book urgently . Suggest a solution for the situation

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you have recently ordered a book online, but the book was delayed and has not arrived yet. write a letter give the detail of your order . Explain why you need the book urgently . Suggest a solution for the situation

Dear Sir

My name is Mandeep Kaur. I am writing this letter to complaint about delay my order. I placed an order of book "world History" latest version under published Gian publication on dated 5th May 2019 from your website.

Let me explain my order in more detail, my order no. is 46795. I ordered this book on Saturday evening at 7.30 PM. I ordered this book at your portal because it is not available in local market. Due to shortage, i need to search online and order it. I need this book as soon as possible as my final exam will start within 15 days. When i ordered this book your website was showing this book would deliver within 7-8 working days.But till date i do not receive any parcel from your end.

Please tell me about availability of this book at your store. If you send me my order then give me tracking no. of my packet. I will collect my book personally due to emergency.

I am looking forward your prompt action.

Yours Sincerely

Mandeep Kaur

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...lable in local market. Due to shortage, i need to search online and order it. I n...
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Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y final exam will start within 15 days. When i ordered this book your website was sh...
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Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...al exam will start within 15 days. When i ordered this book your website was show...
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Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...k would deliver within 7-8 working days.But till date i do not receive any parcel f...
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Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r within 7-8 working days.But till date i do not receive any parcel from your end...
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Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...vailability of this book at your store. If you send me my order then give me track...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d your prompt action. Yours Sincerely Mandeep Kaur
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58100558659 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39110061055 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631284916201 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8747937288 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.6666666667 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.9333333333 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.86666666667 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325099175296 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103335243474 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661670845318 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17325751936 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929430878745 0.0580467560999 160% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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