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Now the machine is very complex, and a lot of difficult work is automated. Does this machine automation have more pros than cons?

Nowadays, people are living in technology era. technology gives us more flexible and multitasking automatic machinery, which solve our tough work within an hour. According to me, there are so many benefit, which over shade its drawback.
On the positive side, machines are faster than human also more convenient and energy-saving. people are surrounding by automatic machinery, which is used to complete work on the time with good quality as well as quantity. These type of machinery reduced physical work of people. To cite an example, in sugarcane factory, generate 1000 tons sugar in one day, that not might be possible with human efforts in a day, but it will be possible now with automation.
Furthermore, computer is also called as robotic machine. it will be more helpful to built structure of any type of process without any mankind errors. Hence the quality of product and services maintain easily. Not also that, it also save lot of precious time for making crucial decision. To illustrate, in the embroidery machine process will be given by computer, which will print all type of design on cloths without any mistake. this type of mechanism are fruitful to gain more quantity with quality without any damage of material.
On the negative side, there are some disadvantages of having full automation. it will take one's job and that will create unemployment I'm the society. As an example, in the previous year, a research was conducted by intelligence agency, in that research, we found that 40% of people lost their jobs due to installation of automatic machine. Although, this problem can be tackled down by framing proper policy, as humans are needed to control and operate the system.
To summarize, in today's pace, no one can imagine their life without technology, as they are addicte of it and gives comfort zone to proceed further.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Technology
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Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ch solve our tough work within an hour. According to me, there are so many benefit, which over ...
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Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many benefits'.
Suggestion: many benefits
... an hour. According to me, there are so many benefit, which over shade its drawback. On th...
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Suggestion: People
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...uter is also called as robotic machine. it will be more helpful to built structure...
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Suggestion: Hence,
... of process without any mankind errors. Hence the quality of product and services mai...
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...maintain easily. Not also that, it also save lot of precious time for making crucial...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01948051948 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70037759021 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594155844156 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4946077116 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8888888889 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05555555556 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114586566623 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327880386443 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393448420203 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0515050768246 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379175365419 0.056905535591 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments