Essay topics:
What do u prefer? university in home town or far away? Why?
I definitely prefer studying in a university far from my home town. In the following, I'm going to describe my fully detailed reasons.
First, studying in a city far from my home town could make me adaptable with different people with different cultures and could increase my independence to prepare me for a future to face challenging situations.
Second, it is a great opportunity for everyone being far from the family's behavior. For example, being in the home town will bring everyone some forces to do non-enjoyable tasks such as periodic family meetings, participating in religious ceremonies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 13.8261648746 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.0286738351 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 43.0788530466 19% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 52.1666666667 27% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 506.0 1977.66487455 26% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 97.0 407.700716846 24% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21649484536 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.13828899271 4.48103885553 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08418047457 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 66.0 212.727598566 31% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680412371134 0.524837075471 130% => OK
syllable_count: 163.8 618.680645161 26% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3080095771 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225519715395 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131929058205 0.076458572812 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134340470033 0.0737576698707 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153195173696 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655165408576 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 86.8835125448 30% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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