Essay topics:
Passion of Bartenders
Someone once said:
“When we want to do something, we would find a way
When we don't want to do something, we would find a reason "
The ways - are all the things you could do to reach the goal, the reasons - are all the causes to pull yourself backward, to convince yourself that your goal is something out of reach. This statement maybe true, maybe wrong in some cases, but it is absolutely undisputed with "passion". Therefore, it is proud to say that passion not only is a firm steel shield but also a heart of the F&B industry in general and of the bartenders in particular.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...id: 'When we want to do something, we would find a way When we dont want t...
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Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...omething, we would find a way When we dont want to do something, we would find a r...
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Line 4, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t maybe true, maybe wrong in some cases, but it is absolutely undisputed with &ap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, therefore, in general, in particular, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 41.998997996 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 493.0 1615.20841683 31% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 108.0 315.596192385 34% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56481481481 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.22370979547 4.20363070211 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90284841589 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 176.041082164 41% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 145.8 506.74238477 29% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.7517594921 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.333333333 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 23.6666666667 7.06120827912 335% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0896371699474 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929808484419 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131494776908 0.0667982634062 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0432965068411 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612305071781 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 78.4519038076 23% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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