Nowadays fathers play a more important role in bringing up their children. Why is this the case? What is its effect?
We live in a fast-paced world where notions and ideas change at a breakneck speed. Formerly, mothers were at the forefront of raising their children, whereas this trend has undergone a metamorphosis in a few countries in which fathers have supplanted their counterparts in this matter. This phenomenon is predominantly taking place due to women’s greater role at work and can therefore cement the relationship between fathers and children.
Males are nursing their children more recently because females are being entrusted with much more significant professions outdoors. Women who used to parent a kid at home have now seeped into miscellaneous organizations, taken over profound positions, and smashed the glass ceiling. This has caused men to take on the role of a babysitter as well as providing room for women to prosper at work. As a case in point, some jobs which were previously regarded masculine such as glamorous seats in the political sector, take, for example PMs or Secretary Generals, are now being filled with disciplined, sturdy, and tenacious women in a few nations. This, consequently, has coaxed fathers into becoming a homestay dad.
Fathers who have been delegated to take care of children at home in the absence of a working mother can substantially improve their relationship with their children. Men have been considered the main breadwinner of the family throughout several decades, and this has all but always left them any time to spend some quality time with their kids at the end of a long, working day. However, if fathers and mothers change this role, fathers will have the opportunity to consolidate a solid relationship with their children by doing the activities which are mutually interesting. For example, mothers seldom fancy playing video games or going to a sports event with their kids, while fathers would be probably more than willing to do so. As a result, such occasions are prone to boost a father-child relationship.
In conclusion, the fact that men are caring for their children at home in some places seems to be a win-win situation. Mothers can gain ground professionally, and fathers find the chance to build up on their relationship with their children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 644, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...fancy playing video games or going to a sports event with their kids, while fathers wo...
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Line 7, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their relationship with their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16066481994 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94296528204 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573407202216 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.103381058 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.2 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251257685438 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952078144061 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622392280322 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166902459985 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280573414392 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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