Last Tuesday you flew from New York to Paris. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain:
• Where and when you lost your bag
• What your bag looks like
• What its contents were
Write at least 150 words
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this email to claim about my lost cabin-size bag on the plane with the flight number of 1029, which left New York to Paris on Tuesday, June 12th, 2019. Honestly, it was my fault to forget carrying the bag while leaving the plane. I suspected to leave it in the cabin after we landed.
The bag is a black fabric-made carry-on luggage with the brand of Swiss-prime. Its size was approximately 30 cm height by 20 cm width by 15 cm depth. As always, I attached a yellow cotton ribbon to its handle to make it easier to be found. Furthermore, my full name and phone number are attached as a badge in the back of the bag.
The most significant issue for me is the contents of the bag. An expensive watch with the approximate cost of 700$, my personal tablet with some data I had no backup of them, my diary which comprises a great deal of personal information, and a unique gift of my grandmother are the most valuable things inside the bag.
I know that it was the mistake that I made, but I kindly ask you to help me resolve this tough situation. Thank you for your support, and I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Amir
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-08-10 | hadijahanshahi | 73 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this email to claim about m...
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Line 4, column 111, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$700'.
Suggestion: $700
...sive watch with the approximate cost of 700$, my personal tablet with some data I ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, honestly, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3257918552 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5031909776 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642533936652 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7533721058 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6666666667 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246862218278 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878461792451 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100320138158 0.0603063233224 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137446712974 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108948684197 0.0580467560999 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.