While recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities rather than qualifications and experienc.
Always to get a good employee, it could be more difficult for employers.It is often argued that, while doing a job interview, employers should pay more attention to their acquiring degree and relevant experience instead of considering personal qualities. I totally disagree with the given statement. In my opinion acquiring degree and experiments days should be considered by employers.
First and foremost , often educational degree help employers to decide that the candidate has well skill for required job.In other word, educational certificates shows that how the candidate could be work in modern world.While many employers think that personal qualities like physical ability such as carrying weight are more crucial for job.But those has their own side.Like that, ability of weight lifting job required for whom hasn’t educational degree.For example , employer wants a candidate as a computer operator.hose who has a good skill like good at Microsoft office And certificate regarding to this work, they could be allowed.
On the other hand, role maker should pay attention on working experience because they want to play expertise in relevant field. An epitome in this regard would be it is generally known that working experience help employer to get best candidate. For instance, a job for driving sector of a company. Always cars are driven by those candidates who did it their earlier life.
In conclusion, role maker should pay a great deal of attention on qualifications and experience because without these thinks a company couldn't walk on developing road.
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- Some think that it is better to get information or advice from other people, while others believe that one can get any information or advice from the Internet or book. Discuss both of view and give your own opinio. 56
- While recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities rather than qualifications and experienc. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43319838057 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90404491691 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595141700405 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 179.270607232 49.4020404114 363% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.111111111 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1111111111 7.06120827912 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205887103962 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796552617896 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826746361886 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132411793585 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533734711758 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.