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International relations can never be completely harmonious because many cultures do not share the same values. - GRE Issue 81
I strongly agree with the speaker's threshold claim that international relations can never be completely harmonious. To assert otherwise would be Pollyannaish and would fly in the face of human history--which is largely a story of power struggles, war, and general discord between nations and cultures. However, the speaker's rationale, although appealing and not without merit, is inadequate to explain why total accord among all nations is impossible. Supporting the speaker's claim is the fact that each culture has its own distinct ethos--consisting of its core values, principles, and spirit w...
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