It is compulsory for children to attend school between the ages of 5 to 16. Many people are in favor of raising the age at which children must start their schooling to 6 or 7, and the age at which they are allowed to stop to 17 or 18.People of htis view believe it is impotant for young childeren to spend more time with their parents,while they believe teenagers would gain more from staying in school longer.
Nowadays, schooling is vital part of the students life.It is necessary for minor to enroll to school in between the ages of 5 to 16.However some people has different thinking that growing the age at which children must start their education life in 6 to ,as well as at between 17 to 18 they are free to complete their schooling.For this mind sets people believe it is most important for minors to stay most of time with their parents,while they assure that teenagers should gain more knowledege to stay late at the school.
Firstly,It is necessary to spend more time with their parents because it will gain more things which school can not provide.In between ages of 5 to 10 child is learning from their parents like they by observing how to communicate with elder people how to give respect them.For example in India there is a culture that to shows respect to elder by touching their feet.
Secoundly,It is not necessary to minors go to school to spend most of time because it will creates strees for them sometime they might be obsses with school and not attending school next day.So, it will creats negative effect to child to be spend more time in the school.For example,If children go to school and spend his full day in school he or she will not get to gather with their loveonce and it might be exhusted to ettend school.
To conclude, I believe that minor are get more time with their parents to learn basic things rather than going to school and spend more time.they can also join school after 6 or 7 and it will benificial for for them and they can stop studying in 17 to 18.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5625 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41235247102 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493055555556 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.2975951904 355% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.7164264594 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 328.5 106.682146367 308% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.0 20.7667163134 347% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.75 7.06120827912 266% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360749213228 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228310520672 0.084324248473 271% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120733121233 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228310520672 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120733121233 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.0 13.0946893788 275% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 23.78 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.8 11.3001002004 246% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.35 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.1190380762 304% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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