Old age is a curse

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Some
...issue whether old age is a curse or not.Some people think that retirement has negati...
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Suggestion: Others
...t has negative effect on people’s lives.Others disagree. In my opinion, being old is n...
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...a curse claim that old people live alone , have no social life and their health is...
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...lone can cause depression in old people.Furthermore, old people have no job anymore and the...
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...ymore and they do not have a social life , which is terrifying for some people. Ol...
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...ly have health problems like: joint pain , heart problems , cancer. Poor health ca...
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...oblems like: joint pain , heart problems , cancer. Poor health can prevent old peo...
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...ple from enjoying their retirement days.If this is true, those opinions can be jus...
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...nowledge the validity of those arguments , it is outweighed by the following count...
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...rgument. When people get old they retire , which means they have more free time fo...
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...people can spend whole day reading books , watching films and meeting their friend...
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...ms and meeting their friends. Futhermore , I would like to say that being old does...
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... doesn’t mean termination of active life . Some of them start new life from that p...
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...e of them start new life from that point .For example , William S. Burroughs and M...
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...of them start new life from that point .For example , William S. Burroughs and Marc...
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...rt new life from that point .For example , William S. Burroughs and Marcel proust ...
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...writing their first books at the old age . I personally believe that old age could...
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...ve that old age could not set limits to peoples lives. In conclusion , I would like to...
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... limits to peoples lives. In conclusion , I would like to to stress again that o...
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...es lives. In conclusion , I would like to to stress again that old age is not a cur...
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...n , I would like to to stress again that old age is not a curse. Yes , it might b...
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... again that old age is not a curse. Yes , it might be true that being old can be ...
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...related to lonliness and health problems . However, it can not be also denied that...
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...enjoy life and even more start new life also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, for example, in conclusion, in many cases, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 275.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6645126456 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556363636364 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7110843248 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34189233252 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131562841698 0.076458572812 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901391758467 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238912452383 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553571750677 0.0645574589148 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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