You were late for a meeting today due to some unavoidable circumstances. Write a letter to your manager apologising for being late.
Dear Mr Jones,
I am writing you in order to explain my reasons for being late at work today.
Unfortunately, i had an unavoidable situation wich was to take my grandparent to the hospital at 9 am, causing me a late arrival to the office around 11 am.
My grandparent is 90 years old and suffers from heart disease since he was 70 years old. Since he woke up feeling not very well and as i was the only relative available at that time, I had no other option but to rush to the hospital in order to get him observed by a doctor as soon as possible.
I am very sorry for this inconvenience which i could not foresee and in order to compensate my absence of two hours, i am willing to work overtime on wednesday and thursday leaving the office at 7 pm instead of 6 PM.
I hope you understand my circumstantances.
Kind regards,
Pablo
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ing late at work today. Unfortunately, i had an unavoidable situation wich was t...
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Line 4, column 136, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...he woke up feeling not very well and as i was the only relative available at that...
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Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...very sorry for this inconvenience which i could not foresee and in order to compe...
^
Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... to compensate my absence of two hours, i am willing to work overtime on wednesda...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 680.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27672955975 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81096194578 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660377358491 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.2308692541 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127892370664 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636272056178 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922819859705 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096893580144 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113490263061 0.0580467560999 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.84 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ing late at work today. Unfortunately, i had an unavoidable situation wich was t...
^
Line 4, column 136, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...he woke up feeling not very well and as i was the only relative available at that...
^
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...very sorry for this inconvenience which i could not foresee and in order to compe...
^
Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... to compensate my absence of two hours, i am willing to work overtime on wednesda...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 680.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27672955975 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81096194578 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660377358491 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.2308692541 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127892370664 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636272056178 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922819859705 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096893580144 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113490263061 0.0580467560999 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.84 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.