Q.Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Although some people argue that children must be given punishment for the crime that they had committed, others believe that child’s parents should be convicted. In my opinion, rather than punishing the parents, I believe that children should be put in prison, so that they do not re-offend the crime.
On the one hand, some individuals think that giving punishment to children who are engaged in violent crimes is crucial as it will refrain them from not re-offending the crime. This is because when they will be punished, they would understand that they would be solely responsible for their unlawful, and therefore, they would think twice before getting involved in any other lawbreaking activity. As an illustration, number of juveniles, who were admitted in rehabilitation centres as there punishment, were fewer in comparison to others where no form of action was taken against them. Thus, I believe that it is vital that child shoud be punished in order to restrain them from breaking the law again.
On the other hand, juveniles’ parents need to be punished as they are solely responsible for their child’s violent actions. Parents must be aware about their child’s activities, such as what their child is doing every day, and under whose company child is spending most time with. If parents will closely watch their child, it might be a possibility that no child would commit crime as they would be afraid of being so closely watched. However, by punishing parents, no child can improve due to the fact that they know they will not be punished.
In conclusion, while parents prison can help them understand what they did wrong in their child upbringing, but I believe that child should be given strict punishment rather than their parents as they will be afraid of re-offending their crime
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03986710963 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61860625286 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514950166113 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.9385892226 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.909090909 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339424115902 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168542880881 0.084324248473 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107547638822 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260327230089 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113443963108 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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