Discuss both views and give your opinion
Some people think developing countries should invite large foreign companies to open offices and factories to grow their economy others think the developing countries should keep large companies out and develop local companies instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the globalization era, foreign investment is mentioned in numerous media and debate through every nation in the world, particularly in emerging countries. While some argue that it is essential for the developing countries to allow foreign enterprises to build offices and factories to boost the development of the economy, another population is interested in domestic growth firms rather than foreign ones. This essay will shed light on both arguments and demonstrate my own perspectives.
On one level, foreign investment plays an essential role in developing countries in growing the economy. The primary characteristics of developing countries, including lack of capital, unemployment ratio high, underdevelop technology… Therefore, utilizing the flow of significant capital, cutting-edge technology from foreign could be the optimal way for developing nations to improve the overall economy's performance in tandem with providing the golden opportunity for unemployed people. Besides, when the foreign enterprise invests in their country, it could boost the relationship between the government and foreign government that creates a wide variety of advantages in the long-term.
From another angle, there are several reasons why the government should protect domestic industries and interaction in the foreign enterprise's business. First and foremost, because of backward technology and lack of capital, the majority of local firms are often hard to compare with international companies. Consequently, the performance of local nations tends to reduce significantly lead to numerous companies becoming bankrupt. Second, in the long-term, the national economy depends on foreign operations if the government allows them to be widespread without control in tandem with no protection for domestic firms.
In conclusion, the government should enact policies that maintain the flow of foreign investment into the country and protect domestic firms. Moreover, the government should improve the relationship among them to develop the country to catch up with world innovation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.93355481728 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1391639641 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574750830565 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.5339979192 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.833333333 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213815636797 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800442388543 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065262408141 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139305226705 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460484730228 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.41 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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