some people say that current level of air travel is acceptable whereas other people believe air travel should be reduced and the government should play a role in this.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
The notion concerning the usage of airlines is appropriate or it should decline seems to trigger a considerable debate. An opinion in this regard put forward by a cluster of like-minded people is that preferring air transportation, nowadays, where time has more worth than money, is absolutely need of the hour. others, however, do not follow the suit and feel that authorities should come up with some regulating measures to decline the use of air travel. The upcoming paragraphs will discuss the twain side and my personal view-point in more specified way.
The proponents of former view assert that travelling by air in these days is not less than a boon for society. In this era, public is rich with all other things but time and air travel has first and foremost merit is time, it takes no time to cover thousands of mile. For instance, travelling time from Delhi to Bangalore by air is 3-4 hours whereas road or rail take more than 48 hours. Moreover, reduction in air travel may results in massive influx on roads because all the air travellers will go by waterways, if it is a possible mean to reach the destination, or roadways.
Nonetheless, other taking a dim view of it and opine that it is the high time for government to impose some laws to minimize the air travel owing to some facts. to begin with airplanes and helicopters create noise pollution as well as air pollution. Every flight emits lethal gases , which is not only harmful for living creatures but also responsible for ozone deplition.Definately,if government do not control is raising trend outcomes will be hazardous for ecosystem. furthermore, travelling by air mode is becoming a fashion statement and individuals choice to travel by this even for short distances .so, restriction should applied in such scenarios. To exemplify, if a journey takes 2-4 hours in road than travelling by air is pointless. In these cases management should supervise airline companies , not to facilitate such services.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, well, whereas, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95495495495 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96635323313 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1310516152 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.857142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313690260909 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105630295766 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493017632763 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210222726506 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.010895216112 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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