Keeping animals in zoos is cruel
These days, Zoos are popular places for people to visit for entertainment and to learn about wild animals. However, they received the flow of mixed opinions. Many people believe that animals should live in nature while others think Wildlife Park brings a tremendous amount of benefit for both them and humans. In this essay, I will shed some light on opposing sides of this viewpoint and then give my opinion.
The first thing is that zoos have an important role in protecting wild animals. As statistics suggest, the number of wild animals in danger of extinction is increasing rapidly due to many reasons such as changing environment, an encroaching forest of the human. Therefore, zoos are useful places where many scientists study and stay breeds of rare animals. In addition, no sooner had zoos built than many of people had jobs such as zookeeper.Zoos are the only safe environment to protect them from poachers, predators, or help them breed.
Secondly, these facilities give an educational resource for their communities. a zoo trip is always the best choice to educate kids through presenting a real tiger or a dolphin in front of their faces. Through observation, students can leave with an impressed vision and get knowledge about the habits of animals and other physical features which is helpful to increase their awareness of wild animals and environmental protection. Moreover, zoos often offer opportunities for scientists to do various experiments. It is easy for researchers to see animals’ habitat and wildlife environment, then they will predict wild animals’ actions and encode their behavior. From that, they can find ways to cure diseases and possibly help rare species extend their population.
On the other hand, keeping animals in the zoos can change the behavior of the animal when they meet long periods of captivity. Being stuck in the same enclosure every day also disrupts the natural migratory patterns of the species, which can have a dramatic impact on their mental health. Animals in zoos and other forms of captivity suffer from stress and depression and display unusual behaviours.
In conclusion, zoos also do have many inevitable drawbacks. However, there is no doubt that building a zoo also makes contributions such as protecting rare animals and its educational meaning. We also have to pay attention to the states of the zoos to create a suitable environment for animals' overall development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2051.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17929292929 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78805605314 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573232323232 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7933784949 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.55 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290464931664 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892531823259 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788784622119 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170513218585 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649365329799 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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