An increasing number of people are now using dating websites to meet their second halves. Do you think this tendency help person or does more halm there could?
Currently, technology plays a major role in the life of individuals through they meet their partners and they get into the relationship easily. However, I believe it has a negative and positive impact on one's life. The reason for my belief is as follows.
Firstly, nowadays generation is addicted to technology and electronic gadgets which keep them connected to the social app such as WhatsApp, Skype, and Twitter, etc. through which they get into touch with strangers and become in the relationship. Online dating has no limit of choice. We can get the pater of our preference and can get a better and similar choice.
Secondly, online dating provides more ways to communicate voice video or simple chats. however, it can be Use by any age of the group . so nowadays people started dating at very inappropriate ages. which affects their career. even online dating is the reason for the higher divorce ratio.
Lastly, in many cases, online dating is the way some individuals get cheated so there are also chances of fraud too. Recently a man married the girl whom he met online then found of the same gender which ruins the life of that guy. Even there is a chance of religious fight because of such activities.
To conclude, online dating should be allowed for eighteen or above agers. And people have to be very alert and secure while doing online dating.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, while, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86324786325 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50117220142 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 106.607317073 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628205128205 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8948869141 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.9411764706 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.7647058824 22.9334400587 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0904299786172 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304611323466 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281456612024 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0521578194246 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404084267757 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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