Consumption of the world's resources (Oil, freshwater, etc) is increasing at a dangerous rate. What are the causes of this increased consumption? What can people do to reduced it?
Natural resources are the pride and identity of our planet. Survival of mankind depends upon this natural belongings such as freshwater, oil and so on. However, it is a hard-hitting fact that the depletion of our valuable resources is at an alarming rate. The utilization of these resources is escalating by leaps and bounds. There are several reasons behind this trend, consequently we need to take some serious action before the shortage happens in the forthcoming. Let me expound further.
To embark with causes, one of the prime reasons is population. The population of our globe is growing and demand of natural wealth is also growing with it. Our cosmos does not have enough resources to support a rapidly growing population. For instance, As per the recent survey of Global Times, momentarily inhabitants use 30% of fresh water and it will upsurge by 60% in the next 30 years which is dangerous for our future generation. Secondly, developing countries like India, China and Thailand have high demand for natural belonging due to their over-dependence on it. In order to live wealthy and raise standard of living human races are over exploiting the resources. To exemplify, almost every middle class family has atleast a private car in the family as a result there is a higher level of consumption of oil on a global scale. Last but not least reason is industrial development. In order to boost the economy, developing and underdeveloped countries are inclined towards industrialization. Sectors like food, beverages, cosmetics, healthcare and so on are using essential oil and fresh water in their production. Hence, the demand for natural sources is rising day by day.
Speaking of the remedy, the regime ought to encourage and educate each and every individual to use sustainable green sources of energy rather than oil and water. Even local authority should award manufactures and singleton with tax holidays as well as subsidies who use solar power or wind as a source of energy.Moreover, Spreading awareness regarding recycling is the best way to curb over consumption of belongings.government can motivate citizens to recycle and purchase the products which are environmentally friendly. In many nations such as China and Japan students are taught the importance of recycling and how to recycle in school so that they learn and make a habit of recycling items.
To wrap-up, I hold my pencil concluding that we should understand our moral accountability and duty regarding natural wealth. We should avoid unnecessary squandering of our valuable resources for our future generation. All in all we can not imagine our life without it, therefore it is the need of the hour to preserve resources.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 848, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...tion of oil on a global scale. Last but not least reason is industrial development. In or...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...lar power or wind as a source of energy.Moreover, Spreading awareness regarding recyclin...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, speaking of, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2273.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 442.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14253393665 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07784205733 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572398190045 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 730.8 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6723784573 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8260869565 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2173913043 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13043478261 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0911138659452 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0236683342461 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263994290884 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549736562532 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313066528985 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 848, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...tion of oil on a global scale. Last but not least reason is industrial development. In or...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...lar power or wind as a source of energy.Moreover, Spreading awareness regarding recyclin...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, speaking of, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2273.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 442.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14253393665 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07784205733 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572398190045 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 730.8 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6723784573 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8260869565 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2173913043 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13043478261 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0911138659452 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0236683342461 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263994290884 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549736562532 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313066528985 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.