The most important consideration when choosing a career or job is high income.
to what extent do you agree or disagree.
Choosing a career path can help people set their professional goals and develop a strategy for getting who they want to be. Some people strongly believe that high income takes the most vital role when people choose their job. Others claim that people go to work not only for high-paid jobs but also for their passion and the working environment. From my point of view, I wholeheartedly agree with the latter argument.
Passion should be taken into account when people choose their job because of several reasons. First and foremost, people can be happier, comfortable when they can do everything they love. Moreover, they will be more productive and put all of their energy into it. For instance, in the contemporary world, many younger people give up on paperwork to fulfill their dream. Secondly, people can discover their value and have more motivation. This is supported by the fact that many people choose their dream job instead of the lucrative job and become successful in their way.
The other factor that can affect the job decision is the working environment. A positive working environment is a workplace that promotes employee safety, growth, and goal attainment. Working with professional coworkers, people can broaden their knowledge. In addition, positive working can help people have a source of inspiration, positive mindset spread a good mood throughout the day.
In conclusion, it seems to me that high income is not the most important factor when choosing a dream job. People should take their passion and the working environment into consideration when they find their job
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... spread a good mood throughout the day. In conclusion, it seems to me that high ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15325670498 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65904799725 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.9761769634 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.0625 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187473853963 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749886414589 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947381749372 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148914905057 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107833483657 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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