People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What arethese problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
Nowadays, there are many different point of views compare the lives in big city and others area. While we can not refuse a variety of benefits when we livw in the city, but the humorous flaws are worth considering. To cope with this fact, government should add some policies, especially cheering the citizens move to smaller regional town
First, we will talk about the disadvantages of libving in big city. In terms of environment, due to the highly increase of population, big city resident find that there are more and more pollution increse day by day. For example, air pollution, noise pollution and others negative elements, which can effectively harm to our heath and life standard. As a result of air pollution, the fine dust rate in Hanoi, the capital of Vietnam, rise dramatically in recent years. The second aspect is affected is households finance. Earning money in city is much easier, but it constrast is family budget is tighter due to the high cost of products. For instance, a gram of pork in the countryside is about 18000 dong, but with the same quality, in city, it cost may climb up to 26000 dong.
As a result, effective policies must be given to the citizens by the government. Personally, I think the most important policy can be given is decreasing the city’s people, by encouraging local residents moving their house to another city, or which better is suburban or rural areas. One of the most fantastic advantages it brings is the equal development between each area. In other words, citizens move into the unspoilt area, they live and work togerther, create new communities, contribute to the life standard of this zone. As a consequence, that new area maybe develop as the bigcity in one day. Another reason why people should move into other area, especially for elderly or kind of peaceful lifestyle person, it is the slower pace of life. You can enjoy the fresh air, watching birds, fishing, relaxing and lots of healthy activities, which we mainly can not find out in the busy city. My grandparent, who used to live in the center area tin Hanoi, now having move to suburban. As I predicted, they definitly satisfied with present life.
In conclusion. I think most people have unfamiliar opinion about the urban life, but they have their rights to decide to live or move, consider the worth of flaws. Goverments need to give some policy, which most important is cheering their resident moving to another region.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
Nowadays, there are many different point of views compare the lives in big...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84725536993 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61518773425 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570405727924 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8386879436 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.55 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.95 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180246808877 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445288446306 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050335388353 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11798217647 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542187723588 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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