Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they relased from prison.
What do you think are the causes of this ?
What effects will this on society?
Nowadays majority of criminals do some crimes after their term of punishment in prison is finished. It has two main causes , one of them their crimes are their habit , another one many criminals cannot find job after they are released from prisoned .
Admittedly the police cannot catch some criminals in their first crime and then, they try to do some crimes again. As a result, they do not afraid of doing crimes and it will be their habit. Subsequently, one day police catch them and they are going to jail and also their imprisonment does not change their character, personality, and habits. In addition, many people and government do not believe to people who are released from prison and these people cannot find a job. For example, a person find a job as an employee and the person goes to company's owner to the conversation. Then the owner considers document which about the person and the owner do not receive to the job.
Some criminals try to rob a bank and a few of them can do this and can avoid police. If the police men find the robberies, they cannot take all money which is robbed from the robberies. In consequence, government lose the money , it is affected country's budget and also the police men can only take prison the robberies. For addition, provided that a person do crime, police men take prison the person and government need to cover the person's expenses. Also many people know this, some of them are very poor and they do not have some things to eat . In other words, the poors do crime for going to jail because government give things to eat to them. If criminals increase, it will be affected country's budget and innocent people may suffer this, I mean their salary will be decreased.
To conclude, if government give a special job for the people, perhaps they do not do crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, then, for example, i mean, in addition, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6397515528 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43542224359 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44099378882 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.7017861357 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236250736256 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918778437379 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535409083457 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163079911857 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268485139143 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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