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Just few weeks ago we woke up to the news of the execution of Hauwa leman,an aid worker with the committee of the red cross to terrorists,so is the case of Leah Sharibu,the Dapchi school girl whom these terrorists have vowed to keep as slaves for life with all forms of torture and pain. This has become a reoccurring decimal in our country.
It's true that conflict is inevitable in human existence, even the world in it's totality is plagued by unreasonable, if not senseless conflicts ranging religious and ethnic crisis to farmers and herds men conflict as the case maybe in Nigeria and other troubled part of the world.
Upon return I plan to synergize with international organizations such as Red cross, the United Nations,Economic community of west African states, African Union,UNICEF to reconscientize my people further on the need for peace, communal love and progress.
This would come to fruition with the wealth of knowledge I would garner from the united kingdom.
On the long run I look forward to creating little cells where we would meet from time to time to keep the zeal to foster unity burning .on the one hand,I will educate my people by exposing them to new information and world best practice through reading,writing and speaking as the major problem causing conflict is knowledge gap, societal stereotypes and all what not.This can be curbed by mixing influence ,experience and knowledge with the good people of the united kingdom.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95102040816 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85311669678 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648979591837 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.007693632 49.4020404114 281% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.166666667 106.682146367 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.8333333333 20.7667163134 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.32 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.