Chevening essay on leadership and influence
class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify">Attaining class="success">success early in any attempt class="is">is class="what">what class="most">most persons crave. Nevertheless, having an impact in an environment or organisation where one class="is">is domicile class="is">is mostly commendable for class="me">me, as class="it">it elicits the idea of one being influential and able to use both man and class="other">other resources to class="meet">meet set goals and targets collectively and individually, this class="is">is the mark of a true class="leader">leader. In retrospect, class="my">my class="most">most achievement class="is">is not personal class="success">success class="but">but accolades and being used as an exemplary figure to others through the various teams, events, tasks, positions I class="have">have class="led">led and handled.
class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify">class="my">my class="leadership">leadership exploits started in 2010 class="after">after being appointed as the Chief Whip of the Nigerian Society of Chemical Engineers Students Wing, university of Port Harcourt Chapter and later the Electoral Council Coordinator, I was enthusiastic, class="but">but class="it">it was eventually doused with the threat of possible election rigging, this challenged class="me">me to inspire class="my">my class="team">team to adopt class="other">other creative and secure modus operandi of using technology and the university security System.
class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify">The height of class="it">it all was in 2014 when the Secretariat and the Final-Year class appointed and elected class="me">me as the male class="leader">leader, land and building Committee Chairman and the Final-Year class class="leader">leader of the religious body I belonged to. Stressing was the land and building project as I was also writing class="my">my thesis and class="other">other academic work at the same time. The quest to raise funds to secure the land required that I had to travel every weekend to class="meet">meet with sponsors and potential financiers. Thus, class="it">it was necessary I delegated duties to class="other">other class="team">team members and ask for feedback from them. funds for the land development was problematic, such I visited the male folk group class="led">led by class="me">me, they cleared the land and dug the foundation trenches, finally the Final-Year class who had class="other">other class project options were able to support the building project class="after">after much solicitation, they provided the funds needed for the materials and labor charges for the foundation and DCP.
class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify">The reason for all these achievements class="is">is because I consistently challenged myself in the face of dynamic difficulties. I always asked myself ‘class="what">what class="is">is the cause of this difficulty’, followed by options and the potentials they hold, sometimes I seek the advice of more experienced persons. In all I came out of class="my">my comfort zone, did not complain, class="but">but do class="what">what I am able to do at that point, this became obvious as those who followed were constantly observing and eventually followed class="my">my footsteps, the effects and results were usually beyond class="my">my expectations.
this has given class="me">me the confidence in class="my">my places of work to always be serious with class="my">my responsibilities, face and handle challenges as they present themselves and has made class="me">me understand that class="leadership">leadership class="is">is about accomplishing your targets and meeting your obligations as much as holding your class="team">team together, influencing and developing others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, nevertheless, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 10.4138276553 298% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4155.0 1615.20841683 257% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 482.0 315.596192385 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.62033195021 5.12529762239 168% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 9.3065035735 2.80592935109 332% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 261.0 176.041082164 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541493775934 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 1121.4 506.74238477 221% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.3 1.60771543086 143% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 25.0 5.43587174349 460% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 172.810495791 49.4020404114 350% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 319.615384615 106.682146367 300% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.0769230769 20.7667163134 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00893065548064 0.244688304435 4% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00504979418655 0.084324248473 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0129548816856 0.0667982634062 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.013129464885 0.151304729494 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181734295594 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.7 13.0946893788 288% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -25.3 50.2224549098 -50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.0 11.3001002004 230% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 33.31 12.4159519038 268% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 148.0 78.4519038076 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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