Dear Me in the future It is midnight now are you still at the workplace Have you drunk out with your friends or had meals at home with your family today How long have you not said thank you to your family How long have you not done housework or gone for a

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Dear ‘Me’ in the future,

It is midnight now, are you still at the workplace? Have you drunk out with your friends or had meals at home with your family today? How long have you not said thank you to your family? How long have you not done housework, or gone for a picnic with them? How long have you not told stories to your little children or encouraged their dreams?

Do you remember when we ignored all our parents’ requests after backing from school, only stuck our eyes at the phone screen checking bullshit status? Do you remember when we sneaked out through the night going to a bar in the city, having our parents find us through the police station? But our mother just smiled, just gently reminding us not to do it again. However, it did not make us more relieved, the concealed sorrows in her tearful eyes that making it more painful than ever. And for many times, we only knew to blame our parents for not understanding us, but, ridiculously, we never put ourselves in their shoes, never knowing that they just do their best to help their ‘purpose of life’ by experience they have endured. Do you remember when we spent hours indulging in volunteering for disabled children but ignored your sister’s bright eyes aspiring for your tutoring?

People usually try to pursue great things but ignore important ones they have possess.

Dear ‘Me’ in the future,

It is midnight now, are you still at the workplace? Have you drunk out with your friends or had meals at home with your family today? How long have you not said thank you to your family? How long have you not done housework, or gone for a picnic with them? How long have you not told stories to your little children or encouraged their dreams?

Do you remember when we ignored all our parents’ requests after backing from school, only stuck our eyes at the phone screen checking bullshit status? Do you remember when we sneaked out through the night going to a bar in the city, having our parents find us through the police station? But our mother just smiled, just gently reminding us not to do it again. However, it did not make us more relieved, the concealed sorrows in her tearful eyes that making it more painful than ever. And for many times, we only knew to blame our parents for not understanding us, but, ridiculously, we never put ourselves in their shoes, never knowing that they just do their best to help their ‘purpose of life’ by experience they have endured. Do you remember when we spent hours indulging in volunteering for disabled children but ignored your sister’s bright eyes aspiring for your tutoring?

People usually try to pursue great things but ignore important ones they have possess.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sework, or gone for a picnic with them? How long have you not told stories to your ...
^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...right eyes aspiring for your tutoring? People usually try to pursue great thing...
^^^
Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'possessed'.
Suggestion: possessed
...ngs but ignore important ones they have possess.
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7268907563 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35037750492 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600840336134 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2272677823 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.75 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.528256253041 0.244688304435 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.248424583069 0.084324248473 295% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.238367031639 0.0667982634062 357% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290503467488 0.151304729494 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.348530676728 0.056905535591 612% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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