My favourite job

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My favourite job

In modern society, there are many jobs but my favorite job is a teacher. I want to be a teacher when I was a child. My family and friends ask me that “Why do you choose to teach”. I choose this job that I love because of many reasons.
First, my ability is very approriate to do this work. I love children so much and I like to communicate in front of the crowd as soon as I was young.
Second, I think that education is a good environment where we can maintain and strengthen the good qualities of people.
Finally, one of the important reasons that makes me choose this job is my parents. I hope that I will inherit my family’s tradition so that I can complete my parents’ dream. It is usually said that teaching is a difficult profession, but with my passion I will try to do it. Nowadays, the salary of a teacher is very low, but I still want to become a teacher.
In my opinion, a good teacher not only teaches knowledge but also teaches people how to be a good human. Therefore, I have to equip myself with a lot of knowledge and skills as soon as I am a student. I hope that I will become a good teacher in order that I can bring my knowledge to the development of education in my country.

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Average: 8.1 (284 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, still, then, therefore, i think, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23504273504 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61561154817 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495726495726 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.9 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9647913509 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.7857142857 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280724658949 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106240566156 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107916336811 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147507301618 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106973013579 0.056905535591 188% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 50.2224549098 161% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 12.4159519038 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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This is a very honorable profession. It takes so much diligence and perseverance. And I really don’t understand why it is valued and paid differently from, say, doctors. I believe that you will succeed and your students will love you!