Agree or Disagree - getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice.

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Agree or Disagree - getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice.

The practice of settling down before completing studies has been common among our ladies and some young men these days. Many people have condemned this act and argued that it has a lot of disadvantages, while others support the practice. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this practice in the society.

Firstly, getting married early has a great advantage of equipping people with real life skills such as self-dependence and ability to make right decisions that is required to function well in the society. This is because when people leave their parents early to settle down on their own, they will learn to be independent and provide for themselves rather than depending on their parents for everything. For example, if a lady settles down in her own home, she can offer assistance to her parents and younger ones. Also he/she can as well sponsor themselves to finish their studies. This will bring a lot of financial reliefs to the parents.

On the other hand, getting married or jobs without completing studies brings a lot of distraction and lack of interest in furthering ones education. When a lady is married, she will be faced with the responsibility of taking care of her home and also the duties of bearing children which is a tedious task. Also for men, once you are married or start a job, there will be no time to focus or concentrate on studies again because of the pressures at work. This will definitely make people lose focus on completing their studies.

In conclusion, settling down in marriage or jobs before completing studies has advantages of providing people with real life skills such as self-dependence earlier, but the disadvantages are huge. In my opinion, people should wait and complete their studies before going into marriage or jobs as this may cause distraction to them.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 309.0 242.827586207 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96763754045 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74371062044 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53074433657 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.828606293 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.642857143 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10756061935 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395283973326 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488867584391 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670734072883 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319638989432 0.0609392437508 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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