Communication has changed significantly in the last 10 yers. Disucss pros and cons
impacts.
Information Technology has not only brought the world closer together. Therefore, we can not only share
information quickly and efficiently, but we can also bring down barriers of linguistic and geographic
boundaries. The world has developed into a global village due to the help of information technology
allowing to shares ideas and information with each other. Communication has also become cheaper,
quicker, and more efficient. We can now communicate with anyone around the globe by simply text
messaging them or sending them an email for an almost instantaneous response. The internet has also
opened up face to face direct communication from different parts of the world thanks to the help of video
conferencing.
Bridging the cultural gap - Information technology has helped to bridge the cultural gap by helping people
from different cultures to communicate with one another, and allow for the exchange of views and ideas,
thus increasing awareness and reducing prejudice.
However, while information technology may have streamlined the business process it has also created job
redundancies, downsizing, and outsourcing. This means that a lot of lower and middle level jobs have
been done away with causing more people to become unemployed.
Privacy - Though information technology may have made communication quicker, easier and more
convenient, it has also bought along privacy issues. Due to website and email hacking, people are now
worried about their once private information becoming public knowledge.
Lack of job security - Industry experts believe that the internet has made job security a big issue as since
technology keeps on changing with each day. This means that one has to be in a constant learning mode,
if he or she wishes for their job to be secure.
Dominant culture - While information technology may have made the world a global village, it has also
contributed to one culture dominating another weaker one. For example it is now argued that US
influences how most young teenagers all over the world now act, dress and behave. Languages too have
become overshadowed, with English becoming the primary mode of communication for business and
everything else.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'share'.
Suggestion: share
... of information technology allowing to shares ideas and information with each other. ...
^^^^^^
Line 23, column 93, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to have'?
Suggestion: to have
...ld now act, dress and behave. Languages too have become overshadowed, with English beco...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1207.87684729 156% => OK
No of words: 344.0 242.827586207 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4738372093 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 3.92707691288 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94444054946 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 139.433497537 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561046511628 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 379.143842365 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.792455958 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.6875 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.12807881773 557% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0476342933258 0.242375264174 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0182421585206 0.0925447433944 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0220956000935 0.071462118173 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0153557723675 0.151781067708 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232604531377 0.0609392437508 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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