In most of the societies the role of mother and father differs What are the causes In most of the societies the role of mother and father differs What are the causes of this difference What will be the parental roles in future

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In most of the societies, the role of mother and father differs. What are the causes In most of the societies, the role of mother and father differs. What are the causes of this difference? What will be the parental roles in future?

Submitted by tgbrfv on Sat, 10/27/2018 - 18:10

Responsibilities of each person differ from one another. Mother and father have also shared various responsibilities between them. These days, there is an ongoing debate that why the role of mother and father is different and what could be the causes of it. In this essay, I will share my point of view by providing main causes of it.

In eastern countries, mother is responsible for all the house hold tasks whereas father shares task related to outside home. The main cause of this difference is that female in eastern countries are not much educated. For instance, according to a study done by United Nations revealed that female education level in South Asia is very low. Therefore, uneducated female have only option as house wife.

Similarly, another reason of the difference in the role is that mothers in these countries are shy in nature. The shyness might be due to less education achieved or it may be a culture aspect. For example, a survey done in early 21st century showed that female in western countries is bolder than other countries. Hence, mothers opt for those tasks in which less social interaction is needed. In addition, the situation will not be different if the literacy rate in female is not increased.

In a nutshell, different roles and responsibilities are there for mother and father. The essay discussed various causes of these differences and its future aspects.

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Average: 7.3 (46 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, similarly, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97446808511 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73715279667 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587234042553 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.4861438817 50.4703680194 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.9333333333 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291954008191 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101252241168 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101175262711 0.071462118173 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19806737787 0.151781067708 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948420125637 0.0609392437508 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 69.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 62.5 Out of 90
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