Parents should be held responsible for children’s acts. What is your opinion about this?
The importance of parents should be held liable for the unlawful activity of their children which was always debatable has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of parents on their children has sparked controversy over the potential impact of this trend in the recent year. In my opinion, only parents are responsible for their children activities.
There are myriad of reasons why parents are solely responsible but the most preponderant one stems from the fact is that parents are first teacher of their children so kids learn many activities from their parents. Needless to say, all these merits stand parents should held responsibility for children act.
However, there are some pitfalls to negate this argument some parents cannot give the concentrations to their children because both are busy on their job so mostly children to do criminal activities which lead to easily mislead into the evils of the society.
According to the argument aforementioned above one can reach a conclusion that parents should be held responsible for children’s acts. Nevertheless, its potential drawback should not be overlooked either.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 1207.87684729 81% => OK
No of words: 179.0 242.827586207 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44134078212 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.92707691288 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96613849832 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 139.433497537 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603351955307 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 379.143842365 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4888740097 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.75 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416094417625 0.242375264174 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207248241168 0.0925447433944 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110182502052 0.071462118173 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262713013974 0.151781067708 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109612988187 0.0609392437508 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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