People usually mix their private and professional life. What are the pros and cons.

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People usually mix their private and professional life. What are the pros and cons.

Mixing of personal and professional life has been a problem for ample of people in different fields such as corporate sector, engineering sector and medical sector etcetera. Due to this they confront with lot of unpropitious circumstances which often lead to bafflement and furiousness. This essay will discuss the impacts of dissolving of private and personal life.
In this competitive era everyone is one is involved in the rat race in order to outshine others. With this notion, they want to achieve more superior positions in their respective fields; hence they hold parties and functions to invite their bosses so that they could derive the benefit of including them in their own life. Concurrently, with mixture of these two aspects they create a work pressure over them which actually advantages them as this prevents them from failure or errors. Therefore, it is quite beneficial at times.
Though, there are some drawbacks associated with it also as when an individual takes his work home or his house situations to work then it does not let him concentrate on either. Consequently, this further leads to drainage of energy and makes a person incompetent at work and also an individual is not able to give time to his family. As a result, it creates cracks between relationships.
In conclusion, professional and private life should be kept apart because a person cannot survive by mixing the both. Metaphorically, these are like two swords which cannot be kept in a single chamber. Eventually, if a person wants to lead a healthy, blissful and peaceful life then private and personal life should not put into one grinder.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, consequently, hence, if, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0442804428 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85306914397 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612546125461 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6624226799 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.153846154 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166226013835 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540438688582 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071789034534 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978546771176 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686042387534 0.0609392437508 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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