Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways.
What is your opinion?
Despite all modern era technological advances, the functioning of the brain still remains a mystery for the science. Developing a way to measure one's intelligence still, continue to be an unsolved problem. This essay will discuss whether the success of a person can be considered as a metric for his intelligence.
Achievements in life are what society often perceives as one's success. These successes may be in career, wealth or in relationships. As the parameters of success keep on changing, it fails to be a good measure of intelligence. It is clear that success or failure cannot truly reflect one's intelligence.
Researchers have come up with a scientific and numerical measure for intelligence called Intelligence Quotient. Regardless of age, this measurement seems to be a good way to assess the intelligence displayed by a person. While some people still think that using intelligence quotient has its flaws, studies show that it is a much better parameter than evaluating using success as a sole factor. That is why the scientific community has adopted Intelligence Quotient as the universal metric for Intelligence.
This essay discussed why success is not the best measure of intelligence. It is established that Intelligence should be measured using the more sophisticated measurement named Intelligence Quotient.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43269230769 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34421915776 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4168047623 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.9230769231 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 7.25397266985 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385541571782 0.242375264174 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134416163582 0.0925447433944 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056623817035 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234929343223 0.151781067708 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488285715286 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.