In under developed countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the
opposite as well.
The international travel has become easier due to the reduced air-fare costs. Many underdeveloped countries are thriving to improve their economy by expanding the tourism industry and making it as one of the key element. This brings both the merits and demerits of it. This essay will discuss both the aspects and will offer reasons to support the viewpoints.
First of all, the tourism industry caters the requirements of entertainment, restaurants, transportation and hotels which means the development of jobs for those who do not possess a degree and are living under the poverty line. Secondly,unlike the industrial sector this is green field which means no generation of pollution to impact the environment. Finally, the beautiful landscapes are the symbols of the country which serve as the tourist attraction and picnic spots, in order to maintain the industry, the government has to play an important role to preserve them.
On the negative sides, many local people get impressed by the foreigner tourists and try to imitate their culture thus, shadowing their own local culture. Many tourists carry with them expensive cameras and mobile phones, which is an invitation to the theft. Crime also increases as a result of involvement in the drug smuggling and prostitution.
To sum up, the tourism industry is advantageous for the underdeveloped countries to make their name in the world, creation of lot of jobs for the local people and preserving the country's beautiful landmarks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , unlike
... living under the poverty line. Secondly,unlike the industrial sector this is green fie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2719665272 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99039386858 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606694560669 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5659196304 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.545454545 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0536228038467 0.242375264174 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0169856225521 0.0925447433944 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032895516801 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0300442540087 0.151781067708 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226326694445 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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