can a woman be a business woman and also a good mom?
ı think it is too hard.Because a child always needs attention and kindness.After business woman has come home,she doesn't have enough energy in order to play her child.But all pedagogs tell that every parent should play with their child at least 20 minutes,thats make child really happy.But how?At the present day life standards are hard.Most of the people work schedule monday to friday,8 hours a day.And also the houseworks like cooking,ironing,washing...etc.are added to her shoulders.
At work she should work,cause her boss wants to see her performance.If she wants to upgrade,she must work a lot.But when she goes to the home,her second job will start "motherhood".
Briefly woman can be a business woman and a mom.But always something will be missing.And this will be wearisome for the woman.
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No. of Words: 150 350
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No. of Different Words: 101 200
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No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 8 20
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.501 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.164 0.07
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