Talk about an important experience that you recently had Describe what happened and explain why it was important to you

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1. in the first reason, 'help', 'independent', 'mature' are repeated. we realized that you like to use 'help' all the time.

2. moving to UAS in 2011 is not a recent experience.

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advantages of reasons don't necessarily use 'help'. we can talk it more specifically.

For example (Eating at home or restaurant) :

First, Eating at home can save money. //reason

I can prepare cheaper food from food market; I don't need to drive or take a bus to reach the restaurant. //why this reason

with the money I saved, I can buy a good book to read; I can use the money for a trip... . //advantages of this reason