Some people say that advertising is extremely persuading us to buy new things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
At present days, we are submerged in the ocean of advertising and can see promotion of products everywhere we see. While some people believe that advertising is influencing us to buy new things very much, others think opposition as people are ignoring advertising because of huge amount of advertisement. Though there are a lot of advertisement, I strongly believe it is taking our concern still now to buy new things.
To begin, it the time of technology and innovation, new products and services are being introducing day by day and new features are being added to the old things. Companies are promoting their products in various way to attract the customers. And peoples are encouraged to grave new things, even these are not essential. If people don't know about new items, they will buy things only from their nearby shops and stay satisfied what they have. Because of the promotion of new products, instead of their unwillingness people are using new things and replacing old things.
On the other hand, advertising is conspicuous that people are becoming annoyed though it's so hard to skip attention from advertisement. As advertisement creates disturbance when people want to watch something on television or using internet, they always try not to focus on advertising. For instance, at the time of watching televisions we always try to change the channel when it takes break for advertising and same for radios. That's why we always look forward when we see advertisement of something.
In conclusion, though advertising is too common to take our attention on it, excessive amount of advertisement still now extremely persuading us to buy new things. I think we can never ignore the influence of advertising even we try to keep away our attention from it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, still, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03754266212 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97943421988 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532423208191 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6731740865 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.428571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357503833871 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126562441728 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881878300752 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222859842485 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058322570238 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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