Essay topics:
Financial Problem
Below you will find some reasons that why I need financial help:
1. Iran face a high inflation rate now, when I got my admission one euro was 4000 Toman but now it is 16000, 4 times increasement.
2. My dad has diabetes and cannot work any more due to his eyes problem.
3. I counted on my mother's help. She earns 3.7 million Toman, in Iran it is a good income per month but converting that to euro it would be 210 euro !
4. My bank account is not zero because I am working 20 hours per week but it is so stressful for me most of my courses are in the morning and I have to change my job or reduce the hours to be able to finish the study, otherwise I have to pay double from 2020 as university fee.
Votes
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'faces'.
Suggestion: faces
...t why I need financial help: 1. Iran face a high inflation rate now, when I got m...
^^^^
Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Iran) must be used with a third-person verb: 'faces'.
Suggestion: faces
...t why I need financial help: 1. Iran face a high inflation rate now, when I got m...
^^^^
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Toman' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'tomans'.
Suggestion: Tomans
...en I got my admission one euro was 4000 Toman but now it is 16000, 4 times increaseme...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...converting that to euro it would be 210 euro ! 4. My bank account is not zero becau...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 52.1666666667 23% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 566.0 1977.66487455 29% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 143.0 407.700716846 35% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.95804195804 4.8611393121 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 4.48103885553 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19949313746 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 212.727598566 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.755244755245 0.524837075471 144% => OK
syllable_count: 173.7 618.680645161 28% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.51630824373 79% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.5260041855 48.9658058833 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 5.45110844103 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0824296767165 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435073466593 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615575145553 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0522088159912 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639757743734 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.97 58.1214874552 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.5 10.1575268817 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.98 10.9000537634 55% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 86.8835125448 26% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.4 Out of 6.0
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